Why so silent? It's probably not what you expect when you think of a grave. Written after the death of a family friend, but it's taken me a while to post.
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This reads like an old poem... if you were aiming for that, I think you achieved it. Good work. I like the imagery you've used here, and the way you provide a mixture of elements (the rose, thorn, vine, maid, snow and grave) strewn around the stanzas.
Oh I love graveyards and this is a wonderfully ambient piece. I am adding to my faves!
i find this beautiful in its simplicity and yet the ambiance the words create behold the complexity of the situation. brava
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