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Goblin Conspiracy
(#) redquail3 2007-01-18
the ine thing about this story is that it's beliveable. though the last chapter is kind of cracked and dosent flow like the others there is still a good story line to it. this chapter I get the feeling of being rushed and proded to the end of the chapter like an unwelcome guest in your home who you are trying to get to leave rather than rather thana comfortable guest being told a story.Goblin Conspiracy
(#) DarkeGray 2007-01-18
Great chapter, I especially liked the whole Dumbles going crazy part. Also I think Flitwick would make a much better Headmaster than McGonagal. I hope you aren't going to go the way of having Harry teach Defense his 7th year, I mean its not that bad, but its overdone, and I don't think a lot of parents would want there kids being taught by a 17 yr old. Also I was hoping you would get Harry with someone also, I know he has been leaning toward Hermione and all and was hoping to see a little romance between them, after all, Voldys dead and Harry can have a somewhat normal life now. Anyways, good chapter, if there is another one, can't wait for it.Goblin Conspiracy
(#) DarkeGray 2007-01-18
Great chapter, I especially liked the whole Dumbles going crazy part. Also I think Flitwick would make a much better Headmaster than McGonagal. I hope you aren't going to go the way of having Harry teach Defense his 7th year, I mean its not that bad, but its overdone, and I don't think a lot of parents would want there kids being taught by a 17 yr old. Also I was hoping you would get Harry with someone also, I know he has been leaning toward Hermione and all and was hoping to see a little romance between them, after all, Voldys dead and Harry can have a somewhat normal life now. Anyways, good chapter, if there is another one, can't wait for it.Goblin Conspiracy
(#) Skoell 2007-01-18
rofl...paranoid!dumbledore abusing medicine...nice idea!!!
nice idea with the christmas party! especially the nargles...now we know why luna thinks about them...great way to give the kisser of your daughter a beating up while disguising it as "help" against this ghastly pest.....
sry can't rate because it's already too good rated....Goblin Conspiracy
(#) Dragen 2007-01-18
What another great chapter, Dumbledore the fool, thinking Harry went into the Dark Arts, (though I believe that the Dark Arts aren't evil, just the person using them...) He is only saying this, because he didn't train Harry, and so getting the thanks and the power that he would get when Harry had killed Voldemort. Now he is going to St. Mungo's, for thinking this. The fool Dumbledore, taking the potions just made him mad. I hope he gets better.
I can't believe that Snape admated that he is a horrible teacher.
lol... so Dobby is going to get a mate named Kikki, I thought that Winky would be his mate.Goblin Conspiracy
(#) DrT 2007-01-18
Nice payback at the end, and a good reason (the first I've seen this done) for Albus' paranoa. I've really enjoyed the story.
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(#) BenRG 2007-01-18
I can't help but feel sorry for Dumbledore in the end. For all that he is the author of his own downfall, it is still a pitiable end for such a great wizard.
An interesting story through and through. A bit wordy at times but never enough to make one want to skip ahead.
Your particular style is growing on me and I think that you are right to keep shipping largely out of your longer stories. Going off on romantic tangents (as JKR herself found in HBP) can sometimes be a distraction and, unless well plotted, can detract from the story.
Overall a good job. Looking forward to more from you.
BenRG's Rating: 8/10Goblin Conspiracy
(#) MiFo71 2007-01-18
Simply said: worth every word, an epitome of a fic good done. Thanks
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