- Bravo! I really liked the ending and you even had a couple more surprises, too. :) Didn't see the Ginny and Gabby additions, but I'm not complaining! It was a fun and very interesting ride you lead us on and I for one thank you for sharing with us. Now, what do you have in store next? Whatever it is I shall be looking forward to it. Keep up the great work!! thumbs up
- Wow, brilliantly done!
And thanks for getting Gabby in there too. I've been obsessed with her since I read Jeconais' _Hope_.
I particularly liked the whole magical army thing. I've never seen that done before.
Author's responseThank you for reading and reviewing - several authors have told me "Whrite what you know about." I served in two branches of the military for a total of 25 years. I guess that came through in my story. . .
(#) harmonyfan 2013-03-09I remember reading this on fanfiction.net and saying to myself "What an amazing story". It had a new plot I haven't seen before, the lemons are relevant to the story, ending that I didn't see coming, an overall smashing story. I liked the military aspect that I have yet to see in any other story.
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