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The World Cup
2 reviewsAU Post OotP, No HBP, With Voldemort gone it's time for Harry to Live.
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Time to Live
(#) Skoell 2007-01-21
the attack at the world cup was a nice touch...i can't see how susan is proud that hufflepuff produces fanatics...
...the dragons singing was funny and showing the prominents before the game is a good touch of realism...
nice harry hermione interaction! pleeease if you pair harry of, do it with hermione as a final pairing...maybe harry can first come togehter with susan or something like that...they are still so young...but not ginny...she's a bit too posessive...Time to Live
(#) rtc5873 2007-01-22
Dear Lora
I have read this story more than a few times. I like better every time I read it. The only thing I've found that you might change or a few typos.
John
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