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I Told You So
2 reviewsWakka musing about Lulu and her emotions. Drabble originally written for a challenge on LJ.
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I Told You So
(#) fyre_byrd 2005-10-02
Again, I like this brief drabble for exploring Wakka's point of view. He's such an amiable pushover in the game. I am glad you let him be a little more fesity here.
My one criticism is that the last line reads a bit oddly. It almost sounds like Wakka is asking this question to himself or that the point of view has suddenly shifted to Lulu at the end. I suggest "Do you even say 'I told you so' to yourself?"
As always though, that's just my opinion.I Told You So
(#) helluin 2006-04-09
Ouch. Ouch. Ouch. Poor Wakka. Good simple insight into their dynamic.
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