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Chapter Twelve: Default Inclusion
9 reviewsPoor, sick Ava... always ends up in the hospital...
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The Mistake
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-24
I can relate to the college stress. I don't seem to get to update so much myself these days. DAMN THEM!
I found this chapter very exciting and full of ambiance and whatnot. I love your writing style! It's a pleasure to read this story. :)Author's response
Yep. College sucks. I'm glad you like my story and my style, you really brighten my day!The Mistake
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-01-24
OH MY GOSH
Even though it's been awhile(curse those stupid professers! lol) I still love your story. its just so.....whats the word?.....intrigal.....intriguing and original. :p love it!!!! pleeeeeease keep writing!!! lol and by the way, thanks for accepting my requst and if you look on my profile, there is a small description of me if you need. keep it up!!!!Author's response
Yes, damn you professors! And thank you for all the positive reviews. I get all warm and fuzzy reading them!The Mistake
(#) Frenchie189 2007-01-24
I think it's Matthew. Well, that's just me.
Anyway.
This story is great.
Is their going to be anymore spider chapters?
I hope not, spiders give me the creeps.
MexxAuthor's response
Is it Matthew? Hmm... I don't know. j/k
But just FYI, you haven't met all the characters! I'll just go ahead and tell you it isn't even half way over yet... okay, maybe half way, but not more.
No more spiders that I know of unles I change my mind! Ick!The Mistake
(#) riaryder 2007-01-24
Oooooh the suspense!
Nice update, lady. And damn those professors of yours. Don't they know you got readers waiting? HahaAuthor's response
Aparently not... I need to get you all to write me a note or something for me to turn in. "You see, Dr. Stooksburry, I don't have my breifs done because I have this really important story on ficwad right now..." Oh, that would be interesting. lolThe Mistake
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-01-25
So..I basically love the style of your writing. I only saw someone else write just as good as you, and I loved their writing. Plus, you storry keeps me very interested I love it. Definetly a favorite. Its hard to find a story about Patrick thats good too. So keep it up!Author's response
Oh thank you! You are seriously too nice to me. If you aren't careful my ego just might swell, but I truly appreciate your praise. :)The Mistake
(#) fob4ever 2007-02-08
woah this is totally crazy! i hate spiders. ick. but this is really good! she needs to stay with Patrick!! :)Author's response
I think she should stay with Patrick, too, but she wouldn't listen to me. :(
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