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Homeward bound
5 reviewsAn unknown heritage can cause so much change. It can make nations fall and mountains tremble. Harry Potter has an unknowm heritage and it is going to change more than just our world...
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Potestatem obscuri lateris nescis
(#) Shaggy37 2007-01-30
Love the chapter! I can't wait to see what you do next with this story. As for language barriers I can't help you there sadly. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)Potestatem obscuri lateris nescis
(#) Silvanis 2007-01-30
Not a bad cahpter although like you said the dialogue is a little lacking. Send me a email at Shinigami06@hotmail.com on what you specificly need help with and i might be able to help. One last thing does Harry get pair up with a female or male?Potestatem obscuri lateris nescis
(#) jabarber69 2007-01-30
Hell of a story, and I hope you find your helf with the languages, cause I'm sure as not it, hell I have trouble with english! and its my native tongue or well actuall TEXAN is but you get my drift!
cant wait to find out more on the harem part! like who all in it?Potestatem obscuri lateris nescis
(#) merrymowmow 2007-03-30
I was wondering when you're going to update?Potestatem obscuri lateris nescis
(#) ROBERT_1958 2007-12-26
Great story.
Why not get Dobby to help?
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