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Delusional
24 reviews"I have a boyfriend. He's been a very bad boy. I still love him, though." One-shot, more creepy than sad. READ!!!
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Delusional
(#) DizzyDior12 2007-02-05
That's some sick shit. It was kind of hard to take seriously. Maybe you should delve deeper into her brain and thought process if you're going to take the scary, insane route. It would be more chilling that way. You should definitley play on the emotions of the characters if you want to improve the story. I liked the end, though.Delusional
(#) closet_vampire 2007-04-04
WOw
I shat my pants
have another pair much?
heehee much love for
writing this.Delusional
(#) -MyChemicalRomance 2007-12-01
that made me shiver
=S
loll
i like the way it was writen
veryy twistedDelusional
(#) BleedingBlackRoses 2008-10-23
Fuckin creepy...but interesting. I liked in...in a wierd way. You're a good writer, I like you're style a lot.Delusional
(#) figilio_vampiri 2008-12-10
HA! That is an awesome twist, I really like it! You do awesome twists at your ends. Write something else soon!
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