"I have a boyfriend. He's been a very bad boy. I still love him, though." One-shot, more creepy than sad. READ!!!
That's some sick shit. It was kind of hard to take seriously. Maybe you should delve deeper into her brain and thought process if you're going to take the scary, insane route. It would be more chilling that way. You should definitley play on the emotions of the characters if you want to improve the story. I liked the end, though.
You're a really good writer. Kepp going!
Eeeeek!!! She tortured him! that was FREAKY!
I shat my pants
have another pair much?
heehee much love for
Girl your crazy but a very good writer. Loved it.
that made me shiver
i like the way it was writen
that was creepy but i loved it
Fuckin creepy...but interesting. I liked in...in a wierd way. You're a good writer, I like you're style a lot.
HA! That is an awesome twist, I really like it! You do awesome twists at your ends. Write something else soon!
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