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The Epic Saga of Natalia Lazarov
1 reviewThe Russian Revolution of 1917 (and beyond) seen through the eyes of Natalia Lazarov, the Tsar's personal chef.
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The Epic Saga of Natalia Lazarov
(#) TamerTerra 2005-08-28
Though your dialouge is very strong, you do seem to rely on it a little too much. Work on your description, and I'm sure that you'll see a big improvement in your writing.
All together this is much more readable than it was broken up in the forum.
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