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Checkmate
(#) sunlizard 2008-04-07
Although written at the age of fifteen, perhaps some judicious editing is in order, namely with regards to apostrophes and some of the most extreme melodrama (for example in the detailing of the haunting and taunting); but I liked most of the melodrama. Good concept.
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