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When Atlantis Sank
3 reviewsPost-apocalyptic one-shot, written pre-OotP! Harry and his son visit Hogwarts, or what remains of it...
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When Atlantis Sank
(#) Badger-dude 2005-09-18
A good idea but this seems alot more rushed than your other HP stories.....When Atlantis Sank
(#) Dunvi 2005-10-22
The idea was a very unusual and yet obviously possible idea. A pat on the back to you. However, I think it could have been fleshed out more. The title didn't reflect upon the idea itself, and I think you could have expanded upon Harry's thoughts, and also written the Worlds' predicaments in a more moving and desperate way, becuase the way you put them sounds a bit like you're a text book, and you feel nothing for the affected innocents.
Overall, though, great story.
~Dunvi
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