(#) gunsandpocky 2005-09-15only you.
i know that's not terribly helpful as criticism, but it's true all the same. the is the first of your hp fics i've ever read and there had better be MORE. whispers something suggestive to remus
Author\'s Response: grins You don't wanna read my first HP fics. They are not of the good kind. Now I mostly just write them when someone pokes me too.
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