- One of the things I like about Fan Fiction is the differing interpretations of how the individuals could develop. You have really changed some individuals. That said the only one I have trouble wrapping my mind around is the change in Lucius. That one aside I find this story one to stretch my mind with, it's well written and the characters have stayed true, chapter to chapter, to the way you've written them. Congratulations.
Author's responseThanks very much! I'm having so much fun writing this...and the feedback is great! I'm actually a bit stunned at some of the positive feedback I'm getting from both websites I'm archived at. This was just something to do to pass the time...
- I'm really enjoying this, quite a unique perspective. I was interested to see how you managed the complete change of character's attitude realistically without using a 'time rewind'. The answer was, of course, beautifully. I hope this isn't abandoned. I realize fall is a very busy time. With luck a new part is on the horizon. Great work!
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