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All filler, no killer
9 reviewsSheena rambles on about her oh-so-tragic life while Andy, Joe and Pete try to ensure that the readers don't leave the sinking ship until her FOB crush guy is identified.
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The Curse of the Curls
(#) luckysgc921 2007-02-06
AHHH!ALEX!
lol.
i wanna know now! :( great chapter. love you. love the lack of bratface. I'm such a bad fan. ha. i gtg to to work. keep writing! i wanna know!Author's response
Thanks for the exclamations. They get my rear in gear. :)The Curse of the Curls
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-06
Ug! I want to know who he is! I think I've changed my mind a dozen times, going back and forth. Anyway, I'm feeling a little sorry for Patrick... makes me want to hug him (what's new with that?).
but I can tell fact from fiction. Probably because I am the latter myself. I absolutely loved this line. You're so clever to be able to throw stuff in like that. Loves it!
And I'm sorry you don't get your copy of IOH for another week... so sad... :(Author's response
Thanks for the praise and your pity. ;)The Curse of the Curls
(#) rawrlittledino 2007-02-06
COOOOOOOOOOOLLL chapter.
Meh, I can't be bothered to write anything else.
So i'll just rate :]Author's response
Coooooool rating point. :)The Curse of the Curls
(#) riaryder 2007-02-06
Oooh, lady.
You are a minx. Keeping us all hanging on like this.
Very insightful into Sheena's thoughts and feelings. I feel sorry for her. Even if she is fiction (very funny, btw).
Anyway, you know the drill. I give you a point, you update, I am happy. Supa.Author's response
You give me point, me is happy and writes more. It's a vicious circle, really.The Curse of the Curls
(#) LOVELA 2007-02-06
You're killing me...seriously.
Raitings? Of course!Author's response
:) (Not about killing you though. Even I have my limits.)The Curse of the Curls
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2007-02-06
Ooh...suspense!!! Why can I never seem to be able to think I'm spelling that word correctly?! I really can't spell.Author's response
Naither kan eye. :)The Curse of the Curls
(#) jessiearei 2007-02-06
great update!
but your killing me here!
i want to know who it is!!!!
update again soon!Author's response
Yes, this needs to be done. ;) Thanks for the review.The Curse of the Curls
(#) whatkatydid 2007-02-07
LMFAO. That's all I did throughout this chapter despite it's content. You are sheena - I mean, Sheer Genius at this. I bet you don't believe how good you are this. Quippy . Thats my new word for you....
Here's my favourites:
/I bet he's busy answering the e-mails we've sent him," Joe chuckled.
/ How does it feel to be a foreteller of actual events??
/Bullshit. Maybe thoughtful bullshit though.
/ That's just funny yo.
/"Yo, Sheena. Saw Patreena outside a tattoo shop today. You think she's gonna get a 'I heart Mom' tattoo?"
/ I love the idea that Pete pics up the strange relationship Kyle has with her mother......
/'Patreena'. That took me back. It used to be Pete's name for Kyle when she was a baby. A blend of both Patrick's and my names. Would have resulted in her intials being 'P.I.S.S.'. Occasionally I regret that we didn't call her that.
/ That truth is, you WOULD do this.
People older than 25 were considered 'porridgers' Dang.......one year to go.....
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I loves you this much holds up IOH and copy of "Leaked In London!"(loada crap...)
xxxAuthor's response
You are my personal cheerleading section, wife. And you have the prettiest pompoms. :O
Thank you.The Curse of the Curls
(#) MMMramen 2007-02-12
My dearest Alex,
Please forgive me for not reviewing...or even reading for a while. I'm such a bad DoJer. Anyway, the plot thickens. It's about time we find out who is snaking my namesake's momma away from the precious Patrick. And my Kyle senses are tingling. That girl is up to no good...or so they say.Author's response
No, you're not. But you should still update soon...
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