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Black Vengeance - 1
(#) Dragen 2007-02-07
What another great chapter;
I do like the plans for over the summer... and I like the journals that Hermione come up with.
I know who put the redirecting confundus charm pn Hedwig; Dumbledore. To stop mail going to him, and to see what Harry is sending to his friends, and if need to stop the mail going to his friends. The fucking ass.
I wonder if Harry sent Dobby to see to Hedwig, to get the redirecting confundus charm removed?
YEAH RIGHT... Dumbledore didn't warn the Magical Law Enforcement, the ass. He wants most of people that were killed, dead... the ass. And to think to use Nott's the ass.
So anyhow, have you decide on the parings yet??
So til next time keep up the great work and update soon.Author's response
Thanks for the encouragement. The journals have a major role to play, and a lot is going to happen over summer.
As for the confundus charm, well, there is a lot more to it. Harry is going to find out what has been happening all these years. As for Dobby, Harry has other plans, not involving the removal of the confundus charms, for Dobby.
Dumbledore is playing a very deep game here, and I will not spoil it for you. He has a very clear objective in the whole business.
As for the pairings, based on the number of votes, it is going to be Harry/Hermione. Cho is going to be a major character in the whole saga though.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Regards,
Maidros
Black Vengeance - 1
(#) Dragen 2007-02-07
What another great chapter;
I do like the plans for over the summer... and I like the journals that Hermione come up with.
I know who put the redirecting confundus charm pn Hedwig; Dumbledore. To stop mail going to him, and to see what Harry is sending to his friends, and if need to stop the mail going to his friends. The fucking ass.
I wonder if Harry sent Dobby to see to Hedwig, to get the redirecting confundus charm removed?
YEAH RIGHT... Dumbledore didn't warn the Magical Law Enforcement, the ass. He wants most of people that were killed, dead... the ass. And to think to use Nott's the ass.
So anyhow, have you decide on the parings yet??
So ‘til next time keep up the great work and update soon.Black Vengeance - 1
(#) cjonbloodletter 2007-02-08
Sorry, I haven't reviewed in a while. I've been tinkering around with my new DLP account( In case you didn't know thats a fanfiction forum site) The story's still going strong. I'm sill not going either way with the Harry/ Hemione, Harry/ Cho debate as I don' think you've put enough personality into either of the characters yet of make me grow fond of them yet. The idea/ premise(couldn't decide between the two words so I didn't)is still intriging. I hope to see more action soon.
Keep Writing,
Cjon the Bloodletter
Conqueror of the Dark RealmsAuthor's response
Please do not apologise; there is no need. Based on the number of votes, the ship is going to be Harry/Hermione. Thanks for your encouragement and opinion, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
Regards,
Maidros
Black Vengeance - 1
(#) Skoell 2007-02-11
nice insight on dumbles manipulation!
sad that amelia bones is dead, i like the stories where she plays the part of inpartial ministry-official...she would have been a good replacement for fudge...
a further reasoning for h/hr might become that hermione turns to harry completely for help and protection for her and her family...her full support of him could result in affection...Author's response
Dumbledore is playing a very deep, nasty and unethical game. There is a lot at stake for him, and he is the master chess player. The politics of the ministry are important in the story.
Thanks for your opinions regarding the ship, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
Regards,
Maidros
Black Vengeance - 1
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-19
I find it interesting that Albus is interested in Theo. Is he looking for a real comrade or another pawn like Severus?Author's response
Albus does not have comrades. He is too far above it. He has lackeys, and pawns. Theo, if he fell into Dumbledore's hands, would be nothing more than one more expendable pawn in his great game.
Thanks for the encouragement, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
Regards,
Maidros
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