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Chase me if you can
(#) MarkPoa 2007-02-11
Wow. I liked this. I liked it a lot. I felt there was a lot of passion and feeling in this one that I was moved by your words. Nice work!
There are still some edits you can make in terms of spelling throughout the poem, such as approaching and awakening. A quick run through edit of this would make it less jarring to us spelling obsessed people. :PChase me if you can
(#) Level27freak 2007-02-15
Wow. I really enjoyed it. I wish i was that creative. You have talent, you should definitely write more poems.
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