Re-done chapter 4! Harry leaves his relatives' home to stay with the Malfoys. Lucius observes his old master's enemy, and Harry charms everyone.
When you send me an e-mail about what you're planing to do, I thought that you might have this story as a Harry/Draco - Harry/Ginny story, but is it possible this might be a Harry/Narcissa - Harry/Ginny story, as I don't see Harry as gay.
Oh I love how Harry talked Lucius into being neutral.
I can't wait to see what happens next, and how the Weasleys are going to react seeing Harry with the Malfoys.
Keep up the great work and update soon.
(#) DrT 2007-02-12
And now we come to it. Ron and the other Weasleys' reaction, and if Lucius is willing and able to prevent the Death Eater demonstration after the game.
This is fun! I love a smart, savvy Harry. Interesting that the Tournament ordered four dragons before anyone even knew Harry was going to be competing. I guess they originally planned to have one as a backup in case one dragon was injured or sick.
(#) 31415 2007-02-12
Still really, REALLY out of character, but interesting none the less. I look forward to seeing what effect these changes in people and events has on things to come.
Great story so far keep it up.
I really like where you're going with this. I have always enjoyed stories where Harry forms his own faction composed of some of Dumbledore's, Voldemort's and the Ministries old followers. I also think that what you've done is believable as well. I can't wait to see what happens next!
very interesting so far.
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