(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-12
Wow, so dramatic!
"Hurt, anger, despair. Confusion. Who ordered an emo song?" Love it!
So this movie being made about him... is it like an e hollywood story 'where are they now?'type of deal... they do have a tendancy to make those as sad for the past stars as possible. I say those pictures are fakes! heehee.
Okay, anyway, so it's JOE! I can see how he would be comforting in a time of emotional distress. :)
Soooo.... got sidetracked, forgot what I was going to say, so Good Job! I love this story!Author's response
Thank you!(#) luckysgc921 2007-02-12
...is it really terrible that I laughed? esspecially at this: And did I mention Bridget had been a pro-wrestler before she settled down with Joe?
I really really liked that chapter, Sheena kinda deserves an arse whooping though--she shouldn't have "encouraged deviant behavior". She has a hatrack! she needs nothing else! ever! except maybe food. and military school for her daughter.
I do do do adore you. and your story. forever and ever.Author's response
Ha ha, no, I'm glad. ;)
You're so right about Sheena. And the military school.
That means a lot to me. :)(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-12
HAHA! I am an idiot... can you please ignore my earlier comment about the 'movie'... HA!
She made a move on me a few days ago For some god forsaken reason I thought it was 'movie' instead of 'move'... add that extra 'i' and it's a totally different ballgame. So let us all point and laugh at Gwen (yes, third person, so sue me) so I can go on about my day being completely retarded.
So yeah... to sum up: I'm an idiot, laugh away.
It happens. ;) That's alright. You're not an idiot. The movie thing is a pretty sweet idea actually. Maybe Pete will pay some people to make a movie of him. ;)(#) whatkatydid 2007-02-13
Sweet mother of Joseph Mark Trohman and a the Pharoah - I couldn't stop reading this the whole way down - PROMISE - it was intense and I loved how Mr Meatball made a cameo. Dumb Animal, what would have added to ambience would have been him licking his nads after Trick kicked him out.
You never stop amazing me with your chapters and I can't help how they make me feel. I swear if you were a book, your spine would all be worn.
Ha ha. It's Meatball's replacement actually but I bet he would have gotten the job done just as... sucky.
And I swear you don't even know what that means at a time like this, Katy. huggagesighs Finally I know who this Fall Out Boy is. What a relief! This was drama to the core! Loved it!
:) A relief for me too. I am not really good at keeping secrets, at least not these kinds of secrets. You know, the ones that don't really matter in the real world anyway.
(#) Amaranthea 2007-02-13
Oh, how creepy is that? Ole Rosie creeping around, following Sheena because Patrick turned her down (or so he says...). How disturbing, and yet realistic. (I mean, we women do tend to get a little bizarre about the men we set our sights on.)
But how awful was Patrick to set Sheena up like that, too? I mean, to walk into your own living room and see a big picture of yourself on the wall with a man and to have your husband accuse you of lecherous activities with a laser pointer? I mean geez....
Although now I'm interested to see what Joe's thoughts are on Sheena and his pro wrestler wife...and what Patrick plans on doing to the oh-so-sorry Fall Out Boy...Author's response
Thank you for taking the time to write such encouraging and meaningful reviews like this one. I am really grateful to have you as a reviewer. :)Is it ok that despite the drama and sadness in this chapter, you still make me laugh?
"Hurt, anger, despair. Confusion. Who ordered an emo song?" That line is golden.
Princess hairball and the laser pointer.
Inappropriate snorting. Yes, I have that disease too, it seems.
All things that broke the drama up nicely. Great job, lady.
And your going to fix things, right? As adorkable as Joe is, it's just not right. Kyle could be damaged for life by this. Well, more damaged than she already is....
Have a point for something or other.Author's response
Mommy Alex is gonna fix things.
Thank you for your approval and lovely reviews. Makes me feel even lamer about my own ones. Thanks for that, too. :P... ;)
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