(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-18:) So, I definately think you should update really soon. This story always makes me happy and smile really stupidly for an insane amount of time. Seriously. You are really great at bringing in little details such as the beetle in the concrete crack and the need to clean the hotel (or lack of need). I found myself wondering why there was a fishtank in the hotel room even before your character asked about it. You definately know what's going on in MY mind. :) Have a point!!!
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