by fruit_addict 1 reviewA helpful device changes the lives of four teens forever.
Category: Sci-Fi - Rating: G - Genres: Sci-fi - Warnings: [V] [?] - Published: 2007-02-19 - Updated: 2007-10-15 - 982 words - Complete
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Great beginning. I love how you started it as an ordinary day, like detention then turned it into a story more interesting. Correction- way more interesting! Awesome start!
xxDarkness' Kidxx
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