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War
(#) Skoell 2007-02-20
nice chapter!
i would wager a guess and say that "pinky" is dumbledore because of his pink mugglesuit?
what is the name of the sniper???? you always change it, even in the same chapter!!! victor or alexander? romanov or Pankratov??
please choose one and then stick to it...it becomes bothersome to read if even you write like you are confused...
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