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The Poofers Story
(#) Ithilwen 2007-02-21
This thing would be a lot easier to read if you put in a few paragraph breaks. I know ficwad eats tabs, but it's short enough so that you could put in some breaks manually. There should be a new paragraph every time there's a new speaker.Author's response
ok thanks for the tip...I'm kinda new to writing stories so i'll keep thos in mind
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