- While Harry's adopted the yin-yang, it wasn't obvious to me whether he realized that he, himself was the one leaving the yin-yang notes--Which was obvious pretty early on, even in the first chapter.
RAB as the Weasly family ghoul was a brilliant idea, as was the potion in the cave being inferi-fluid. DD, I assume, broke out of his own tomb as either an inferi or as a ghoul with a little outside help. I'm guessing an inferi that LV picked up. Leaving LV potentially in possession of Harry's command words.
Your take on magical owes is nicely original.
Magical-based gray-goo. Cool. :-)
Some very interesting ideas here. Thanks for sharing it with us.
- Ni-i-ice!! I do like this chapter and Harry's revenge and the reasoning behind so much of what he's done. It's going to be interesting to see if DD is indeed an inferi now, and picked up by Tommy and/or his boys, and what problems that will portend for Harry in his effort to remove/replace Tom.
That was a very creative way to pass on information to the reader without interrupting the flow of the story. It beats the heck out of an "info dump".
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