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a crucial character of patrick's past pays him a visit, will it rekindle the spark he's been missing for so long or bury the flame deeper than ever?
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Dead On Arrival
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-02-20
i am in love with this story please please update it - i would love you forever and ever and ever . . . and ever !
xxxxxxxoAuthor's response
im working on it and just fyi: i am also absolutely in love with your stories!!Dead On Arrival
(#) riaryder 2007-02-21
Aaaahhh!
This is SO good. You have just got to write more.
Greatest last line ever. Officially!Dead On Arrival
(#) angel_of_madness 2007-02-21
I really like your story and the way it's written and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Sorry this review is so short, but they will get longer with every chapter you post, I promise :-)Dead On Arrival
(#) cnharp 2007-03-06
i am this scene...nice, i like it. I like this story so far and am curious to where you'll take it. I love her name though, i can't believe he actually said it without laughing!!Dead On Arrival
(#) scarrlifigous 2007-03-19
Meheihfodisfoidshf;
Wow.
Scarrlifigous, darling. I have no clue what that means (random word I made up)
but whatever it is, it's definetly a good thing. :]]Dead On Arrival
(#) scarrlifigous 2007-03-19
Have a rating point. :]
I find this story a lot of something. :p
I really like the memory scene, and Tree Stump reminds me of this advertisement sign I jacked from someone's front lawn:
"Stump Grinding.".
Ehehehe.Dead On Arrival
(#) Syn_INC 2008-01-11
Oh my jesus poor girl and that name. And I thought people would butcher mine.
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