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A Moment in Time
1 reviewVergil's thoughts within a thought. Very short piece. This place still needs a general genre.
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A/N: This suddenly sprang on me as I was trying to sleep (what is it with my muses that they feel I should be writing when I'd like to get some sleep?), I have no idea where it came from and it is only very short. I suppose it is more descriptive than my usual fare. I'm posting this as I'd like some feedback as I can't work out if I like it or only like the idea of it. po
The idea of this, is to imagine everything that Vergil's thinking as all parts of the same thought happening in just a few seconds. That's kind of what I was aiming for, though how successfully I've achieved this, I don't know. I think this could be the first time my author notes are longer than the story XD.
Disclaimer: Me no own. As much as I'd love to, the only thing I own is probably too much in the way of DMC collectable stuff than can possibly deemed healthy for one individual. But it makes me smile, what can I say? XD
A MOMENT IN TIME
They had fought, with a hatred passionate in its strength, to this point. The intensity of the movement and emotion still inside him, carefully hidden and controlled on the outside, yet burning and writhing beneath.
The warmth of his opponent's blood on his hand, mingling with his own. In his hand he could feel through his sword the small vibrations as Dante's body shuddered. Leant in towards him as he was, to push the blade in further, he could feel Dante's laboured breath on his ear. The gentle sensation giving his thoughts temporary reprieve from the cold of the rain.
His reflection stared back at him from familiar blue eyes. He knew within the reflection, as here, his eyes reflected those eyes of his twin back, reflecting each other endlessly like living mirrors, binding them together throughout the endless infinity.
Two souls, sharing an endless moment in time.
The idea of this, is to imagine everything that Vergil's thinking as all parts of the same thought happening in just a few seconds. That's kind of what I was aiming for, though how successfully I've achieved this, I don't know. I think this could be the first time my author notes are longer than the story XD.
Disclaimer: Me no own. As much as I'd love to, the only thing I own is probably too much in the way of DMC collectable stuff than can possibly deemed healthy for one individual. But it makes me smile, what can I say? XD
A MOMENT IN TIME
They had fought, with a hatred passionate in its strength, to this point. The intensity of the movement and emotion still inside him, carefully hidden and controlled on the outside, yet burning and writhing beneath.
The warmth of his opponent's blood on his hand, mingling with his own. In his hand he could feel through his sword the small vibrations as Dante's body shuddered. Leant in towards him as he was, to push the blade in further, he could feel Dante's laboured breath on his ear. The gentle sensation giving his thoughts temporary reprieve from the cold of the rain.
His reflection stared back at him from familiar blue eyes. He knew within the reflection, as here, his eyes reflected those eyes of his twin back, reflecting each other endlessly like living mirrors, binding them together throughout the endless infinity.
Two souls, sharing an endless moment in time.
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