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"Sleep Talking"
6 reviewsHarry and Co. plan to liberate Belle and his daughter, they get a break and Harry learns of the remaining horcruxes
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Family Issue
(#) Essedyss 2007-02-24
Great chapter! I really like how Harry and Bella are growing closer. Though, I am curious as to how Harry's friends, especially Neville, are going to react to everything that's happened. Anyways, keep up the excellent work!Author's response
Hopefully Neville will never know, that would be a serious complication, hint, hint. Ask me no questions and I'll post you no spoilers. . .Family Issue
(#) flower123 2007-02-24
I hope she does escape and that the baby is fine.Author's response
Hey, that would be tellin'Family Issue
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-25
Interesting set up here. I like the fact that Harry was informed about the horcruxes and there locations. Security through obscurity, eh? It's a pity that you didn't think to add Tom Riddle's award for special service to the school as one. I saw that in a story and that one makes sense. I do hope that you continue to update this one soon. My question is when will Harry collect and take care of the horcruxes? What is going on with Harry's friends? Isn't he expected at the Burrow for Bill and Fleur's wedding? What is happening with Ron and Hermione? You've left alot of questions without including the other two main characters in your story, so far.Author's response
Thank you for reading and taking the time to write a very insightful review. Interesting fact, I did consider using Riddle's award as a horcrux, but I was looking for more mundane objects directly related to the founders, and Riddle had already made one from his own stuff. Harry and company will begin tracking down the remaining horcruxes as soon as Bellatrix and their unborn child are sprung, and not to put too much of a spoiler in here, Bill and Fleur's wedding will be very important to the story. I will update in three days.
Thanx again,
N!
Family Issue
(#) jfitzgerald236 2007-02-26
This is a great story. I hope that you will update it soon. Thanks.
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