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You would think that someone who can control sand could build a decent sand castle...ironic, isn't it?
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Gaara's Sand Castle
(#) makani 2007-02-26
The concept of Gaara, master of sand, never having made a sand castle in his life is amusing and in all probability correct. I didn't see major grammatical errors, the and flow of the description and dialogue seemed logical, but there was one thing that bothered me about this story: the way Gaara and Temari dismissed water. Coming from a desert, where water is rare and no doubt precious, I have a hard time buying the fact that any of the Sand siblings would write off any amount of fluid as 'just water.'
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