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7 reviewsSome are born to command, others have it thrust upon them
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Family Issue
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-28
I'm still liking your story very much. That being said, I have to tell you something completely unrelated to draw a correlation. Did you ever see the movie, Robin Hood, men in tights? "Wait for it... Wait for it!!!" That sense of anxiety of waiting on your next chapter to pull the great escape for Bella only to be denied when the chapter is, while quite good, unrelated. Well, HMF! I'll wait for it. :)
Geovanni LucianoAuthor's response
Thanks for the chuckle, yes I've seen RHMIT, some great lines there - Hey Abbot! and Dick Van Patten, as the Abbot says "I hate that guy. . ."Family Issue
(#) jfitzgerald236 2007-03-01
Please update soon. I have really enjoyed this story so far. Thanks.Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm enjoying the writing so I guess that's a good sign!Family Issue
(#) flower123 2007-03-01
so harrys now a commander and marietta is a luitenent .interesting freedom for bella is coming!Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, yep, shouldn't be long now.Family Issue
(#) DrT 2007-03-31
A note to those who rate this story (and others like them) as OOC after the first few chapters. Yes, it is in many ways. This particular story left canon around chapter 2. Why expect it to veer back at this point? Unless someone is forcing you to read fan fiction, why continue to read any story after a few chapters when you hate it?
"T"Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I've often wondered about that, isn't part of the fun of fan fiction to say "what if?" and then run with it?
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