(#) foolishwandwaver 2007-03-01Interesting chapter, but I thought that there should be a couple of sentences in there saying something about what was going on with the Dursley's besides Harry overhearing the Evans. Other than that bit, and that is just my opinion, this story has captivated me. Psst: Write faster, and I'll try to read slower!
- OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. THIS STORY RULES!!!! I like how Pim works with Harry. Will Harry still be getting a letter from Hogwarts? Will Harry still be getting the brother wand to Voldefagot? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
- Your story has been well planned out, with enough intrusions as to how the story will play itself out, though the updating of the new chapters is a bit slow. But for a story of this quality, I don't mind waiting for the updates. Keep up the good work!
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