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• there are three words in 'i love you'

  (#) arydyss 2007-03-04

  The freestyle format fits well with the concept but it's hard to read at points. The sections that I thought flowed most naturally were those that had each new fragment as a new line.
  Overall, it's a nice look at a piece of Cloud's character that is often glossed over.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the crit! It's much appreciated. I'll go back over it with that in mind.

• there are three words in 'i love you'

  (#) Faeriegirl 2007-05-11

  AWWWW I loved it. But Clouds hair cries but still, it was sooo sweet!
  
  "Hi, I'm Cloud Strife"
  "And I need to shop for new clothes"
  "And I love you"
  
  Love it :)

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