- I've been enjoying this story, especially the subtleties - it's fun to watch the interactions, and the personalities are beautifully realised. There are (obviously) TONS of questions, starting with where did Dudley end up, where is David's wife, and how did the team manage to neutralised Fudge so opportunely. I've been having a wonderful time.
Keep abusing Umbitch for us, ok?
- "I have to admit, though, I've seen all kinds of great flying tricks, but I've never seen anyone fly so well without a broom."
Great beginning with lines like that. There are several characters you write really well...Ginny for starters.
Terrific chapter. That character Edgar is just riviting. Makes up for the frustration in finding this story. I think that's it for me with SIYE.
The idea of therapy for Harry is intrieging, and a surprise. Did not see that coming. Though, come to think of it, just a conversation with Ginny is therapy enough.
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