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This Isn't What You Wanted.
(#) MMMramen 2007-03-10
He still doesn't know?!?!? It may be years before I get another update and he still doesn't know! You're slowly driving me insane and I thought you should know. I love Bea's relationship with Alya. I think I've said that before, but I still mean it. And Bea's dad visiting her and bringing her home...I had tears. Of joy, even. But she'd better tell Pete in the next chapter or I'm going to pop. And you don't want little Kyle pieces all over the place. Ew.Author's response
No way Mrs Whittaker, I'm still cleaning up after those holy OCK's....This Isn't What You Wanted.
(#) patrickdance4me 2007-03-10
aw at pete wanting to die. that is so sad.This Isn't What You Wanted.
(#) LOVELA 2007-03-10
I would have squealed with delight that you had updated this story if I weren't so tired. I LOVED this chapter!!! It was uber-fabulous! I loved everything about it. The adorableness of Ayla, the first interaction of Pete and Bea, CRYSTAL!, and of course the flashbacks. You are wonderfully wonderful!
Smooches.This Isn't What You Wanted.
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-03-14
There's nothing that could excuse my tradiness. But you know what's up, I guess... Blah.
This was written in the typically beautiful and powerful style that I am used to from Katy's words.
We've all had those tears that don't want to stop, because our heart knows that it's best they just get out. -> This is all too true.
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