(#) finding_beauty 2005-05-09(Whee, I'm going on a review spree ... or something.)
I really loved this. Kain/Edge wasn't really something I would have thought up before ... but having just in the last few months gotten myself exposed to FFIV, I did immediately take to the Kain/Cecil/Rosa triangle. I have to say I particularly enjoyed the not-as-game-translation dialogue; somehow Palom and Porom speaking like 20th century teenages always threw me off anyway.
... Now I'm going to have to go look into your other IV stuff. >_>;
- This is a great story. I like the sense of understanding that Edge conveys, and the cultural differences that you bring out between Eblan and Baron, especially since the game doesn't really explore those angles. I also really like Kain's edgy, "back off!" reaction to Edge's pushing him. Very nice!
(#) Tombetoile 2015-05-03I really liked how you directed your story. The dialogues were VERY pleasing (good job, you !), each of them with their specific personnality, and the atmosphere around them was captivating. Their differences (personnality and culture) was, paradoxically, what meant to reunite them. Your approach was original, I liked it. I do love this couple and it's a shame there is not much stories with them, so I was even more happy to found yours ! I hope you will be inspired with another fanfiction for Kain and Edge ^^ (and sorry if my english seems fishy or wrong, I'm trying my best :p)
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