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Chapter 23
7 reviewsJamia's suspicious of Lyn, Gerard upsets Cheyenne and Lyn adds another point to her score.
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(#) AlexSanDee 2007-03-15
Oh gosh I think I'm the first review. Donna, Donna what are you thinking? Poor Chey, Gee is so understanding. He better not lose his focus (of course he will) I love this story so much but you already know that. Give mum a kiss for me on her B-Day!Author's response
Donna's just being nice, I won't tell you what happens to Gee, but you know what goes up must come down.
kisses Sandee From my mother btw, she's knows all about you.Forbidden
(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-03-15
ah, donna! she's too kind hearted for her own good...unlike that Lyn BITCH!!!!
I hae her, i was getting so angry!
Great chapter!!! :)Forbidden
(#) McrXRXMyXSavioursX 2007-03-16
shes such a devious little cow
MOOOOO!
another great chapterAuthor's response
Moooo! indeed lolForbidden
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-03-16
3 cheers for Jamia!throws confetti at least someone sees trough Lyns "aww-take-me-back-to-the-croup-im-SO -nice-and- changed- and- what-not- now" -face. " takes confetti and makes Lyn eat it and then, like that's not enough, she has guts to take advantage of Donnas kindness! >__O! not nice. makes Lyn eat even more confetti
and again, you got me giggling like an idiot and then emotional and sad, in one chapter. that's like greeeeeat. nods and grins make great party for mom, and write more when you can. ^__^Author's response
takes confetti and makes Lyn eat it LMAO. I love your reviews taht make me giggle (i love to giggle) and I'm glad I'm messing you around emotionally 'tis my aim. Anyhoo I'm writing another chapter now and I'll hopefully be able to post it tonight.
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