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Chapter 7: I'm Kind of a Big Deal
14 reviewsCharlie and Patrick go out to lunch. *Patrick's POV*
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Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-16
ohhhhhh Mrs Whittaker! I freakin love you, this was just for me wasn't it?? lol
I missed you!
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I totally wrote this for you. You know that. But don't tell the rest of the DoJ...xoxoxoRock The Cradle of Love
(#) Frenchie189 2007-03-16
This story is great.
I just took the time to read the whole thing.
You've made me laugh so hard at some parts.
I love it, update soon?Author's response
Thank you. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review. It means the world to me. Seriously. :) Glad you like it so far.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) XTinkerbellX 2007-03-16
Aw...the ending was cute.
I really love the way this story is going.
^_^Author's response
I was aiming for cute, but there's a fine line between cute and creepy. Thanks for the review, daaaahling.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) JokeMeKisses 2007-03-16
Jocelyn is absolutely adorable.Author's response
:) I try. She just might get cuter.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) lclutebark 2007-03-16
ahaaaha
Aww 'It feels like carpet'
LMAO!!
Great chap!Author's response
I cracked up in the middle of anatomy and physiology when I was typing this up. Now my classmates think I'm weird. It was totally worth it. :DRock The Cradle of Love
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-03-19
Yeah. Hi. I am still alive. Sorry for being late to this review party... :(
You can't have my rating point because, obviously, this chapter's been stuffed with them already. And that doesn't surprise me. It's hilarious and cute and exciting.
Patrick with a little kid. melts
You are awesome.Author's response
Alex? I was about to fly all the way to Austria just to make sure Bart didn't kill you or something. But now I have to cancel my flight. Loves you :)Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-03-21
I love this story. Can't wait for an update!! You are a great writer.Author's response
Aw, thaaaank you. I try. Updates are underway...I swear.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) riaryder 2007-03-23
How did I miss this update? I'm such a bad fan. Anyway...
"You can't write this stuff." - Well apparently, yes YOU can. And very well.
I love Patrick. I love the baby dilema. But most of all, I love Jocelyn. Oh, to be 3 again and stroke the Biscuit facial hair.......mmmmmmm
Great update. The carpet thing made me laugh so hard, I just can't tell you.
Yeah, you better not keep me waiting so long next time xxxxxxxAuthor's response
Miss Rianna! It's about time, woman! Kidding, kidding. Since I can't stroke some Biscuity face hair, I have to live vicariously through a fictional 3 year old. Sad. Sad indeed. And as I always promise(but never live up to) there is an update in the works. :)Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) halleluiakid 2007-04-29
"It feels like carpet."
MWHAUUAHAUHUAHUAAHHUAHUA
loved it.Author's response
Thank you, darling.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) LOVELA 2007-05-09
I'm wondering how you write children so so so well?? Hmmmm? ponders
Also, can you smell that drama that you've got cooking!? You are a madd chef with madd skillz.
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