(#) Quycksylver 2005-10-15Heh, I liked this. Your diction and writing style was very good--and very similar to Austen's...well...except for the fact that Austen would probably have died of shock at the idea of two men getting it on, lol. Also I'm not sure even Wickham would have the cheek to refer to Darcy as "Fitzy." ponders that Hn... I take that back... Wickham probably would. XD
Anyway... nice vignette! I'd love to see a longer story from you--with this pairing, or any other you might come up with.
Author\'s Response: pinku thanks - it made me laugh when i was writing it - i sort of did it as a challenge. hellyeah wickham would call darcy "fitzy" - he's got enough cheek for anything. if you want to read more of my stuff - well - ficwad's where i archive it, so just look under my username goes even pinker
- Lol...I'm kind of at a loss of what to say. On the one hand your line about Leviticus was splendid, on the other... Darcy? Wickam? I've simply never thought of them that way, though now I'm starting to wonder why. Smile I think you've corrupted me... Pride and Prejudice will never be the same for me. ^___^
- yuko-chan, lighten up. this is meant to be farce and I doubt Jane herself, what with that delightfully dry wit of hers, would disapprove. And as for writing Darcy/Elizabeth (with a 'z', dear, hence her nickname "Eliza") that's done splendidly in the novel and probably in any other fanfiction about P&P. It's time the boys had their fun. Great work, this!
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