JS. A little bit of angsty fluff for you all. I'll love you forever if you R&R.
Very good! I didn't think it was generic, but what do I know? Awesome story!
This is a good story, and if this was your first fic then wow. All I can say against it is some of the spelling needs fixed, but it's nothing major. :)
And sometimes stuff is generic or cliched simply because it works. But this wasn't generic, it had something new to offer.
Its so sad that there is such a small Labyrinth following here, but your one-shot here was fabulous! You really should write a whole story. I think you would write a great one.
i loved it :)
the Labyrinth is one of my favorite movies,
and i've never read a fic about it before, until now of course...lol
this was really good.
im favoriting it!
We need more Labyrinth Fanfic!
This was short, but sweet!
It was well written. Keep writing-you have a nack for it.
Enjoyed, though there were a couple of typos. Patients, for example, should b patience.
Meant to say "be". Eff typing on ipad.
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