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Far From Where She Belongs
3 reviewsHmmm...how to describe this fic...I dont know. Read it! Review it! Rating for language.
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Far From Where She Belongs
(#) Tinuel 2006-07-04
Ooo :)
A great job describing the emotions behind it all. I LOVE Jareth, you managed to keep him so close to character. Mm ^_^
Rather cliche for her to find herself in an abusive relationship, but you made it all fit nonetheless. And I'm a sucker for having th' lover comes to rescue! theme music
No, but really. This was done amazingly well ^.^ I think i'm obsessed with your writing.Far From Where She Belongs
(#) Ithilwen 2006-08-06
Don't you remember Sarah's monologue? "My will is as strong as yours. You have no power over me." Don't portray her as a helpless thing without making the case for why it would happen.
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