- Ooo :)
A great job describing the emotions behind it all. I LOVE Jareth, you managed to keep him so close to character. Mm ^_^
Rather cliche for her to find herself in an abusive relationship, but you made it all fit nonetheless. And I'm a sucker for having th' lover comes to rescue! theme music
No, but really. This was done amazingly well ^.^ I think i'm obsessed with your writing.
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