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• Total Knockout

  (#) Rangerscout 2007-03-18

  Sounds entertaining, please continue.

• Total Knockout

  (#) Kourtesan 2007-12-30

  Try to eliminate your passive voice and POV issues.
  
  ~ Kourtesan

  Author's response

  Eh, passive voice is underrated. I'd love to hear where the POV is giving you trouble, though.

• Total Knockout

  (#) Inudork08 2008-02-24

  ...at least my stories aren't boring!!!
  ...rude prick!
  ...tell me my spelling errors...
  i oughta...
  oh and i DID spell stentch right, dumbass!
  who the hell taught u how to spell???

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