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Revenge Is a Dish Best Served Outside a Six-Mile Radius
4 reviewsInuyasha, Kagome, Hojo and a serious boxer fetish.
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Total Knockout
(#) Kourtesan 2007-12-30
Try to eliminate your passive voice and POV issues.
~ KourtesanAuthor's response
Eh, passive voice is underrated. I'd love to hear where the POV is giving you trouble, though.Total Knockout
(#) Inudork08 2008-02-24
...at least my stories aren't boring!!!
...rude prick!
...tell me my spelling errors...
i oughta...
oh and i DID spell stentch right, dumbass!
who the hell taught u how to spell???
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