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The First, The Second, and Forever After
9 reviewsYaoi: HikaruxKaoru. Hikaru had always wanted his brother in more ways than one. His lust clouded his judgment when he decided that he only wanted what he wanted. His fate was sealed when he was cau...
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The First, The Second, and Forever After
(#) LycanthropeVl 2007-10-22
stabs prosecutor Go and have merry sex.... seriously, the fuck? Not the story... I would probably kill a guy if he was questioning me in court. I'm evil that way.
AWESOME STORY!
(when my lame ass figures out this web site I'll 'rate' this... somehow)The First, The Second, and Forever After
(#) Daisy567 2007-12-04
Great so far...sadistic tho. I can't wait for it to contiue!! Plz keep writing!The First, The Second, and Forever After
(#) tragicWithACapital_T 2008-05-07
ah, amazing writing
please update soon!!!!The First, The Second, and Forever After
(#) kygirl101 2008-06-08
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Great story, but it's so sad!!! I have a hard time thinking Hikaru would take advantage of his twin.
sniff...
I like the formatting, what with the italics and bold. But, who was taking in the very beginning?The First, The Second, and Forever After
(#) deanio 2008-07-13
this story is the shit! life isn't always fun and games, i like this darker side. keep it up! :)The First, The Second, and Forever After
(#) shikastruefan_daiki 2008-08-29
Oh. My. God. This prologue made my heart rush! PLEASE continue. I didn't see anything too problematic, I think it'd be better if you had made the lawyer's voice in bold and Kaoru's regular so he could seem more booming and Kaoru would seem smaller compared to him. But other then that, I love it. I'm kind of wondering who's accusing Hikaru, because Kaoru apparently doesn't want him to be put away...
Please update soon!The First, The Second, and Forever After
(#) kygirl101 2008-09-06
...okay, I'm reviewing again. And I simply hav a couple things to say...
I points toself Want points at screen MORE!!!!!
it's so suspensful; I must know what happens!!!! Oh please please please write more!!!
begs, stands up and regains dignity so...yeah. that is all. thanks youThe First, The Second, and Forever After
(#) XxSongBirdxX 2009-03-20
What a storyline you have!
I would love to see more of this!
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