taking a sad song and making it better. not exactly Rude/Reno's totally excellent adventure; very sorry messiers Lennon & McCartney.
Wow, this was...dizzying. As a rule I tend to be wary of second-person stories, because it's tricky to do them well, but you've done a damn good job with it here, and the voice is quirky and strange and compelling. Good stuff!
This is great. Wonderful use of second person, and it made me squee like a fangirl.
God,this has to be one of my very favorites. I can't believe how emotional it is despite the economy of words. I have read it at least 3 times,but it's deep and engaging.. Thank you for sharing it!!
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