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• Family Issue

  (#) Essedyss 2007-03-21

  chuckles What they did to Dung was great. The bath scene was quite hot, too. Though I can't wait to see where the three are headed next. Anyways, keep up the good work! Update soon.

  Author's response

  Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing. Mundungus Fletcher is the HP version of Fabian in Oliver Twist, only without the orphans, or the inate charm. And those are his good points . . .

• Family Issue

  (#) flower123 2007-03-21

  well they got the locket and they 'killed' bella. so ya they killed two birds with one stone. and now shes a red head.update soon

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and responding, yep, redhead. Can't help myself, I love redheads.

• Family Issue

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-03-22

  OK, read it, still too short for my tastes. If you're going to do NC17, do it with the cheesy circa 1970's porn music in the background. :) That said aside about the porn action, you've got an interesting chapter here. I'm just curious on if you can transcend into other subplots and lay them. You still need the other horcrux and you NEED to introduce the trio. It would definitely help the plot and thicken it up a bit. That's all I'll say on the subject.
  
  Geovanni Luciano

  Author's response

  Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing. Hey, wasn't it GLuciano who suggested that I 'make use of the R rating?' Oh well. Good news, all the Horcurxes are accounted for in the next chapter, bad news; it's a cliffie.
  Laughs evilly
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