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• Water in the Desert

  (#) Gundamwinggirl 2005-07-13

  This story was very insightful and moving. It made me realize how much water really means (even though I personally don't like it). This was a very good story.

• Water in the Desert

  (#) Roaming_Fool 2006-07-25

  This is one of my favorites. I love your ending lines, comparing the Old Testament law of "a life for a life" with FMA's Law of Equivalant Exchange. I also liked the attention to detail, such as how Mustang came by his cigarette that had been made in Ishbal.
  You've also done a wonderful job of showing Mustang suffering from the beginnings of combat stress reaction while still keeping him in character. Overall, a very nice job.

• Water in the Desert

  (#) lizziedoesitall 14 hours ago

  Hey there!
  
  I just finished reading your story, and I’m completely blown away! Your writing is so captivating, and I couldn’t help but picture how amazing it would look as a comic.
  
  I’m a professional commissioned artist, and I’d be super excited to bring your story to life in comic form. no pressure, though! I just think it would be a perfect fit.
  
  If you’re interested, hit me up on Instagram (@lizziedoesitall) or Discord (lizziedoesitall). Let me know what you think!
  
  Cheers,
  Lizzie
  

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