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Water in the Desert
(#) Gundamwinggirl 2005-07-13
This story was very insightful and moving. It made me realize how much water really means (even though I personally don't like it). This was a very good story.Water in the Desert
(#) Roaming_Fool 2006-07-25
This is one of my favorites. I love your ending lines, comparing the Old Testament law of "a life for a life" with FMA's Law of Equivalant Exchange. I also liked the attention to detail, such as how Mustang came by his cigarette that had been made in Ishbal.
You've also done a wonderful job of showing Mustang suffering from the beginnings of combat stress reaction while still keeping him in character. Overall, a very nice job.
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