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Spiders Flee Before It
7 reviewsOur trio makes it out of the Chamber of Secrets, and someone else joins the 'family.'
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Family Issue
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-03-28
You did an excellent job here. I would have never suspected leaving Iris there. Excellent. I'm curious on your list of Horcruxes, how you plan on destroying them and what the ramifications that you have worked out as far as backlash goes. Please update soon.
Geovanni LucianoAuthor's response
As always, thank you for reading and reviewing, and for your kind remarks. I was originally going to name the snake Isis, but in parselspeak it's just too many "s'ses." I have a plan for destroying the pieces of Riddle's soul - sorry for posting that spoiler there . . .Family Issue
(#) koppe 2007-03-28
Loved Myrtle... hope she'll stay with them. Maybe she can "posess" Harry during sex too - just to gain a different perspective?
Looking forward to Alexis getting born - and hope she'll soon get a half-sibling.
Keep up the good work.Author's response
As always, thanx for reading and reviewing; I'm glad so many people love Myrtle as much as I do. I want to do more with her in the future, I think she has great potential and want her to be an important part of this story. The issue of possession will come up again. When Myrtle is invited to possess a corporeal person she refers to it as 'visiting.' Sounds more friendly, doncha' think?Family Issue
(#) Essedyss 2007-03-28
Another great chapter! More sex AND a new member of the 'family'! Brilliant!! Didn't see the Myrtle angle at all, but that's a good thing! Keep up the good work and equally good surprises!Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing and especially for your encouragement, I am taking chances here. The response to Myrtle in the story has been overwhelmingly positive, I'm so glad I'm not the only one with a soft spot for our little ghost girl!Family Issue
(#) selenepotter 2007-07-25
I like your myrtle story so much that I decided to read this one too. Great use of Myrtle!Family Issue
(#) Worldmaker 2009-04-02
The problem with using Myrtle in a sex scene is this: according to Rowling, she was a third year when she died. That makes her only 13.
Child pornography, anyone?
Sorry... just a bit of squick mixed in with the peanut butter and chocolate.Author's response
I see your point, but remember, that would make her chronological age sixty three.
I must say, she looks good for her age. . .
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