#The room is dark and bland, stretching out and away from you for what seems, to your eye, like forever. But he seems to glow in the darkness, looking almost alienly beautiful, caught in that momen...
This is fantastically written. Kudos to you and your English teacher.
I don't like you. You write too well. Speically as I know stuff. Speically about mates, and the way you're supposed to look out for them. Really good. Glad you're proud.
(#) Alyss 2007-03-30
It makes you want to go hug him!! Aw so sad.. and very colourful
Absolutely beautiful. This is seriously a 'wow' fic. Extremely touching. I enjoy the descriptiveness of your words and how you use such a great vocabulary.
I still love it! But why did you post it four times?
wow, thats fantasically written. sighs
but, grins, you are right, not morbid enough for me! I look forward to my depressing one...
Beautiful. The morbidity is wonderful. Excellent job.
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