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you're just the girl all the boys want to dance with
3 reviewsi haven't updated in a while so i figured i should probably get something out there, nothing too exciting but i put it together rather quickly, so sorry for mistakes or confusion. reviews are love*
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Dead On Arrival
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-03-31
haha, hotel sex with Joe interrupting makes my life.
you wrote it very very well and if you don't believe me ask my friend who i made stop reading her 'One Tree Hill' fanfiction so i could read her the loss of virginity scene.
ahh you rule my life.
pointsss for you.Dead On Arrival
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-03-31
I really liked it. I love how Ana/Patrick act toward one another.Dead On Arrival
(#) ssketchator 2007-04-27
"determined and scared to death" is possibly the most amazing way to describe losing someone's virginity. i love it.
also, i can totally picture joe doing that. kudos. kudos.
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