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American Girl
4 reviewsWhen Harry goes to California for a break from the war and Voldemort, he comes back to England with a few stories for Hermione and Ron. When an unexpected new Gryffindor comes to Hogwarts, Harry i...
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Missing You
(#) Cateagle 2007-03-01
Nice start to your story; I can't wait to see how it evolves, esp. since it seems likely that Mandy will end up in England and, if she does happen to be able to use magic, Hogwarts, which could make things "interesting" for Harry, very "interesting".Missing You
(#) Cateagle 2007-03-02
Oh, one little thing, should Mandy's top at the start read 'I LOVE my BF, but what he don't know won't HURT him'?
'Tis just one word but it makes a big difference in understanding.Author's response
Thanks a bunch for the info!!! Thanks for reviewing and please stay tuned for the next chapter that will be up as soon as I get 7 more reviews. :)
~Shaylee~Missing You
(#) irishfighter 2007-03-02
awesome first chapter, please update soon.Author's response
Thanks for reviewing and I'll try to update as soon as I can.
~Shaylee~
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