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Reborn
(#) sparrowhawk 2006-11-03
dude. make a longer story... or chaapter.Author's response
It was just an intro. Sets up the story. The next one WILL be longer.Reborn
(#) le-Popo 2006-11-06
Can't really say much on the story since it hasn't developed much, though it's interesting to see that you'd be bold enough to kill the main character.
Generally the writing is good; no obvious mistakes and no overly boring word choices. You might want to add that this is a prologue at the top, though. Just to avoid confusion.
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