Categories > TV > LazyTown
(#) thegayestgoth 2012-03-30awwwwww. it was sweet. i don't like the idea of stephanie and sportacus having sex, but that's in MY mind. i enjoyed the story. as of late, i'm on the stephanie/sportacus kick. i'll be adding some of these stories soon. i really enjoyed it, especially the part where she burned herself and sportacus takes of it. that just makes me smile. :)
(#) Summerseve 2013-03-01I love seeing seemingly static characters develop in to real people. You have done that very well. The one thing I would say is that I felt rushed towards the end. This story could have unfolded much more slowly. The tension could have been twisted so tightly... I know you can do this because you write really well.
Please keep writing.
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