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• Family Issue

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-04-18

  OK that was a cute little chapter and well done on the marriage. I'm still ever so curious as to what the Weasley reaction will be to the marital status of Mr. Potter. In addition, you have Neville to consider as well as the Dark Mark reaction to Voldemort's death. Compounding it with whether Snape will seek out to have his mark removed as well as Harry's willingness to remove it. I love your idea with utilizing the ghosts to counteract the Inferi. I would suggest a trap for the werewolves at St Mungo's involving powdered silver as a means for defense, however you will have to work out a delivery method. As far as your ultravoilet defense to battle Dementors, Hand crank batteries like the ones used by the US Army during Vietnam error for communication would be more idea and would be chargable in a magical field. That or utilizing insulation to ward against EMP.
  
  Food for thought. Now crank out another. :)
  
  Geovanni Luciano

• Family Issue

  (#) snowman 2007-04-18

  Good job.

  Author's response

  Thanks Snowman

• Family Issue

  (#) lycus 2007-04-18

  Another Gerat Chapter But That Was Expected. And You Had Me Asking Why Would Belle Turn Harry Down Even Though It Was Not The Best Preposal.Now For The Handfasting.... Brilliant Does This Mean Harry Can Still Marry Hermi...I mean Can Harry Still Marry The Unnamed Witch Waiting For Him At The Burrow? Anyhow With The Adoption I Thought You Would Have Harry & Myrtle Claim Him Beacause She Couldn't Have Children With Harry. OH..Yeah SNAPE Why Would You Do That Now Harry Can't Kill The Greasy Git...O Well Time To RANT A Little Does Anyone Pay Attention To What They Read I mean H/HR Could Have Conversations Without Speaking During Second Year Not To Mention That When Hermione Was Released From The Hospital She Ran To Harry Screaming You Solved It With NO Mention Of Ron..Fourth Year...Need I Say More.Fith Year Hermione WAS Harry's Girlfriend If You Don't Belive Me Read The Book Again And Pay Attention To The Harry/Hermione Moments Like After They Visit Grawp.And After The Snake Attack.Sixth Year Before The Amorentia Harry & Hermione Couldn't Stop Complementing Each Other. And After Dumbledore Was Killed Who Did Hermione Instantly Run To? And Now The Big Question.Does Anyone Think That If Hermione Wasn't Insecure About Herself Would She Settle For Ron?

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and reviewing. I agree with you 100% concerning Ron and Hermione, and anyone who doesn't see that she and Harry belong together is delusional IMHO.

• Family Issue

  (#) twilliams1797 2007-04-19

  whoever rates this story as a train wreck is a damfool™. this story has from the start been innovative and interesting, if someone wants to read another rehash of cliches, plug in the names of their favorite ship, then sobeit go and read thaqt story, I for one am looking for interesting plots and interesting characterisation, and maybe even something a little different.
  like this story.

  Author's response

  Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. And especially thank you for voicing my opinion. Life it too short to waste time on bad fiction. I try to write the good stuff, if I fall short it's not for lack of trying.
  For the record, I welcome constructive criticism. If all I want to see is "good job" then I'll just share the story with my closest friends and family. If something needs improvement, let me know, I may not agree with you but I welcome your opinions.

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